Ielts Writing task 2 – Sugar-based drinks (đồ uống nhiều đường).

Dưới đây là thể loại bài two-part question, trong đó đề bao gồm 2 câu hỏi riêng biệt. Với dạng đề này thì phần thân bài mỗi đoạn chúng ta sẽ trả lời 1 câu hỏi của đề. Các bạn tham khảo bài viết band 7.0-7.5 dưới đây của một bạn học sinh của mình nhé.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Write about the following topic:People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less?

These days, there is an increasing number of sugary drinks available on the market. In my opinion, there are several reasons behind this trend, and I believe that the government can take some viable approaches to help customers keep away from these kinds of beverages.

First of all, the fact that a wide range of sugar-based beverages is available in the market is caused by some reasons. First, as consumers today seem to be addicted to sugary drinks, there is an extremely high demand for these kinds of beverages. As a result, to boost sales figures and maximize profits, companies are trying every possible way to manufacture drinks containing a lot of sugar. Second, the beverage industry is becoming fiercely competitive. In order to develop a niche and stay afloat in the market, companies have to develop various products. That is why in many supermarkets in the USA, hundreds of sugar-based beverages are displayed on the shelves every day.

Nevertheless, I think that this negative development can be dealt with by several methods. To begin with, one of the most effective ways is for the government to carry out campaigns with the aim of raising the public’s awareness of the harms of consuming sugary beverages in the long run. By doing this, consumers would become more health-conscious and choose to stay away from these types of drinks. Another workable approach is the government should limit the number of sugary beverages produced. This can be done when the government imposes heavy taxes on drinks that contain much sugar, which may encourage companies to produce healthier drinks such as mineral water and milk.

In conclusion, there are some reasons why many sugar-based beverages are sold in the market. However, I believe that this issue can be tackled if governments do something to make people more aware of how harmful sugary drinks are and heavily tax those drinks.

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